a random deck

[ryan]

k ive not been duellin too lond but here my totally random deck

Special summons/tributes and rituals x7

Shinato King Of A Higher Plane
Ancient Gear Beast
Silent Swordsman LV5
Vampire Lord x2
Skull Archfiend Of Lightning
Chaos Sorcerer

4 star and lowers x13

Sangan
Cyber Jar
Mirage Dragon
Old Vindictive Magician
Pyramid Turtle x2
Giant Rat x2
Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
Spirt Reaper x2
D.D. Survivor
Tribe Infecting Virus

Spell Cards x18
Nobleman Of Crossout x2
Premature Burial
Monster Reincarnation
Pot Of Greed
Heavy Storm
Snatch Steal
Swords Of Revealing Light
Hammer Shot
Messenger Of Peace
Book Of LIfe
Creature Swap
Graceful Charity
Mystical Space Typhoon
Shinatos Ark
Double Spell
Back To Square One
Lightning Vortex

Trap Cards x8

Sakuretsu Armor x2
Torrential Tribute
Mirror Force
Call Of The Haunted
Token Feastevil
Waboku
Magic Cylinders

Wot u think i shud do then to improve my deck

[Thunder_Struck]

you've got got some good cards for someone who hasnt been playing long. and you deck wud pwn if you just slimmed it down and took some cards out.

7 monsters that cannot get straight onto the field abuses your first hand predictions. your gonna be drawing at least two tribs or rituals in your first hand almost guaranteed.

keep your lvl 5, x2 V.Lords and your chaos sorcerer.
there isnt much point to the rest.

level 4 or lower monsters arent bad at all mate. im not gonna suggest anything harsh as im guessing you wont have the cards (no offense intended) but try to get your hands on a sinister to help yourself out with field presence and your tribe. when you do take out a mirage dragon for it. also if you can get a magician of faith try to...

the reason to take out mirage is because not many traps are now being played by tyhe majority of players so you can make a useful placment by taking him out.

18 spells is way to high now that youve got a 18 monsters.....

take out shinkaosososos ark, double spell, back to square one, now youve got a healthy 15 spells

ok now you have 18 monsters and 15 spells leaving you with 7 free places for some kikass traps....

ok keep in you x2 sakuretsu armour, mirror force, torrential tribute, call of the haunted and magic cylinder.

waboku isnt that useable especially when you want to kill their atking monster rather than take it like a naughty dog...

this is a harder card to get hold of but try and get your hands on a single bottomless trap hole, with that youve got:

monsters: 18
spells:15
traps:7

total of: 40 cards

now you will be kikin ass from dusk til dawn.... hope that helped ;D

[Topman_2005]

Nice fix, thats a good fix to go wit ryan

[Thunder_Struck]

I jus hope he's alrite with it lol

[ryan]

kl kl i will do that mate cheers

[Thunder_Struck]

glad i could help ;D

[Chocobo!]

yeah uve got a good start there, i no quite a few pple who dont believe me that 8 tributes is too many

[RedCap]

depends if any are special summons

[Topman_2005]

Its irelavent, 8 is far too many even if there ALL special summons, at the MOST you should have 5, and at LEAST 2 should be special summons